Friday, October 7, 2011

"A Strange Love Story"

Maybe it was about five 'o' clock in the morning......
A beautiful young girl got in from the front door... A charming face, smooth & fair skin, glittering eyes & of course she had possessed an attractive, lovely smile via her pinky lips like petals..... She was wearing a light green slim fit top; plus black skirt with a shiny brown ribbon on her skirt just near her broad hip... A black school bag was hanging on her right shoulder with a single strap...... For a while, her eyes were running all the place-looking for a space to have a seat... On the very next moment she came to me,..I took my legs out of her way-let her to go to the shutter,.. She sat by my side right next to me......

I felt the smell of her sweet-smelling perfume & it got me like almost intoxicated with that sweet smell... And her arm was touching me...and it gave me a potent suave feeling that I never had before, it got me numbed & I felt like that my hair stood up on ends... I realy loved that encounter & was so liable to feel her touch... I looked at her in my sleeves, she was not showing any hesitation or anxiousness... Why should I be dreanch? if it is okay with her?! - I thought...... And I had lost my idleness, my sleep that I had before...just because of her. I loved her touch realy but of course not with an ulterior motive or with a dirty mind... It was actually just a simple innocent desire to feel that physical sensation out of her arm......

Is she an A/L student? Perhaps she is going for tution classes or something?! My mind was messed up & got stucked with number of quizes without answers about her... She was next to me - I was next to her... She was on my left - I was on her right... She was in her world - but my mind was on her... She looked at her wrist watch & I did take a look at it too...she would have seen the clock ticking...but I couldnt. The bus ticket was yet squeezed between her long, thin fingers & I was wondering that how lucky really is that piece of useless paper to feel her touch...?!! In her other hand; a small white hankie......

She must be an A/L student! Might be going for extra classes... YES!!! thats it..thats the thing which can happen... Thats the explanation with more possibiliy-obviously! I thought...murmured to myself and it earned me faith on my concept... I just wanted to recognize her...thats all. And dont know why the hell I wanted to do so either... It was not a love thing for god shake but, maybe an attraction...or whatever it is, I was curious & also deep confused....

Damn! Few more to get to the final destination of this journey... I was helpless...couldnt even think of what to ask out of her...but can't be a man without a back-bone though... Its now or never...Yes! I knew that too... Got to do something...just have to step on it somehow...little bit of guts needed & a drop courage too... In spite of my fearness & shyness I took my guts & made myself - my heart bit valient... I tapped on her arm slowly with my finger-tips... Asked "Are you doing your A/L's ???"

"Am a varsity student malli !!!"

12 comments:

  1. super, meke sinhala trnsltn eka mama baluwa wage mathakai.

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  2. Deeps.... :) thank u sis... Thank u so mch..thnk u 4 ur knd wrdz :)

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  3. Chuti nangi.... Hmmmm yp nanga..oya kiyawanna athi.. Mage sinhala blg eke http://adikaramsithivili.blogspot.com/ eke "Aadareta Kòtu Kaali" kiyala thiyenne meke sinhala trnslation eka thamai :)

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  4. ow ayya, eka thamai. mama ekata godaaaaaaak asai.

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  5. Chuti nangi... Hehe thank u nanga swt :)

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  6. Ohhh,,,I'm sry 4 da late commenting Rayviyan. Coz I didn't hv tym 2 come 2 the internet!,, kkk.. "Gud writer hv gud ideas" Dis 4 uuuuuu...!
    So...Dis z a vry beautiful one! I think dis z one f ur experiences! hee..hee...:D isn't it?... Any way, dis publication z vry different from the others. Another new idea! Gud! Vry gud! I love it! Dis z vry attractive...Niyamai! Exactly dis z superb! ELA!.... I lyk dis vry much!,, :) :) :) :D :D :D.......... <<>>>><<<<>>>>////\\\\\\>>..... ( bt,eya akka kenek wuna eka thamai upset eka! haaa..haaa...!!,, lol..:D :D :D..) WOOOOOOOOW...Another great one!!!!......Thanks 4 da sending dis link to ma facebook acc. Gud luck! Keep it up! U hv a vryy..vryy...bright Furture,,,,God bless u! Rayviyan...... :) :) :)

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  7. excellent writing machan! keep going!

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  8. Livya... Ah tz k dr..! Thnx 4 ur cmmnt livya.. Hehe ow hane tz thru 1 f ma prsnl exprncez... Ai oya ehema kiwwe?????

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  9. Kosala... Thank u macho0 thank u so mch! ;)

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  10. mata nikam hithuna oyagen ehema ahanna....dat's all.... dn't worry abt dat!..

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  11. Livya... Hehe ehenam kamak na ithin :P

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